Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Truth In The Twirl



"We are three generations of teachers. You too will teach some day." But she hated school, all sharp penciled perfection and forced alliances with math and science. The subjects of school did not tickle her attentions, but jangled her nerves. As if the hours till final bell weren't long enough, there was homework afterwards. "When you have finished your homework, you can go out and play." But the assignments were hard and she wasn't interested. Paying attention to something that lifeless was so hard for her. Already, at such a young age, the expectations of life were weighing her down, and waking was just the beginning of another wasted day.

Mid monotony, her teacher announced a field trip to the museum next week. Initially unresponsive, having never been to a museum before, she warmed to the idea once Jeremy told her there was no math or science involved in the outing. "You just look at pictures and stuff". Now she was excited.

The rest of the week passed slower than usual but finally the day arrived. She dressed carefully in a pale yellow dress that was her favorite due to it's billowing effect when she moved. There was so much chatter on the bus, growing in intensity as each voice fought to be heard above the roar of the engine. A huge cheer announced their arrival and soon they were standing in the middle of a room larger than the auditorium at school! They walked in a group past painting after painting, listening to the white haired lady tell about artists and brush strokes. All the paintings were old, and though they were pretty, she soon got bored with them, as she did most things. Her attentions wandered and her feet followed.

She found herself separated from the group, alone in another room of paintings, though smaller than the first. And yet here, in the center, not far from where she stood, was the most beautiful statue. The plaque read "Sophia -bronze sculpture." She studied Sophia in her billowy tutu and pony tail...something inside her came alive with a knowing that only happens in rare moments, when flimsy possibilities become stone truths. Raising her arms, she pointed her toes, and though never being asked to do so before, she knew exactly how to turn and arch her foot in perfect point. She raised her arms and billowed her dress in large sweeping twirls about the room. Freedom and artistry, beauty and movement, all the things she needed that now had form. Twirling, twirling, twirling until dizziness made her stop and she tottered, unsteady, back to Sophia. Sweeping a small but grand arm up and then down, she curtsied and rose.

"This is what you were born to do" said Sophia. "Can you feel how your body remembers something you have never learned?"

"I feel so happy" she said.

"Your parents will fight you on this", Sophia said, and her stern look communicated all the hardships this road would bring, as well as untold joy worth it all.

"Yes" she said, thoughtful for a time. Brightening, "But one day they will get their wish. When I can no longer do, I will teach.........(giggle)...dance."

Sophia looked down and smiled. "Exactly".
(I love this series of museum paintings my Pops is doing. I see so many possibilites and my mind writes their tales as I examine the faces, posture, placement, light. Enchanting!)

14 comments:

Debra said...

I visited "Dad's Paintings", so moving. Beautiful.

Phoenix said...

lol I love this painting so much and the story that goes along with it is perfect!

So inspiring - you've definitely got creativity running in your family :)

RNSANE said...

This is a beautiful story! I so much enjoyed reading it.

Wander to the Wayside said...

Your dad painted this? And this story came to you in conjunction with it? Seriously? And you're working in a office with a boss who is cheats his workers and sexually harrasses you on a weekly basis? When you could be doing 'something' more in line with your talent with words? Am I missing something here?

Tabitha Bird said...

WOW, beautiful words, and beautiful paintings. And yes they are magic, I can see why you are inspired to write. I would be too.

Anthony Duce said...

Love your story for the painting. Pursuing anything in the arts generally takes going against the grain. The painting is fantastic too. I viewed the artist's (your father?) website: Beautiful work. He's a master! You must be proud. Especially like the figurative pieces.

Renee said...

I love the painting, just love it. It is so happy and full of magic.

Now the story, what a twist and how I love it.

This cheered me so much.

Thank you.

Love Renee xoxo

Tracey - Just Another Mommy Blog said...

I honestly loved both the story and the painting. Beautiful and sweet and inspiring. Thank you for sharing both...

Tracey - Just Another Mommy Blog said...

My 4 year old walked in and saw it and exclaimed "I like that! It's SO beautiful!! They're dancing together!"

Ghost Dansing said...

dance with me.....

Woman in a Window said...

I love the painting and I love the story but what I love more is that you and your father are feeding, and feeding off of one another. There is a beauty I will never know.

xo
erin

Amias said...

Quiet Commotions indeed! This story and the painting is a duo made in heaven --- and I know, you will do as the little girl did in this story, you will find your way when the right moment comes, oh, I dare say, it's already here!

Maria said...

Can I just mention that I LOVE visiting your blog? I settle back for my daily story fix and adjust my imaginary beret and let the music sway all around me and just...dive in.

Strawberry Girl said...

Fantastic!! I love the way you've picked out a story from the picture... excellent! I've been inspired to write from music before and have done some picture prompts but haven't taken it too seriously before... this is inspiring girl!! Great piece of writing! :)

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