tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post4717040039608569295..comments2024-03-06T17:54:44.536-08:00Comments on Quiet Commotion: Word CrackingWine and Wordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-47858647569232818802015-02-20T18:34:09.494-08:002015-02-20T18:34:09.494-08:00beautiful sentiments...beautiful sentiments...Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Waltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02102841132897972874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-17660678042660958832015-01-26T08:18:43.163-08:002015-01-26T08:18:43.163-08:00word cracking is like line breaking,
it does take ...word cracking is like line breaking,<br />it does take talent,<br />well done imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-59932103873598343382015-01-25T07:20:24.760-08:002015-01-25T07:20:24.760-08:00red and hot, that's how we define love in life...red and hot, that's how we define love in life.Drew Doyle Storm Snyder Minowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03489092055551728136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-50376290198817956502015-01-20T06:53:49.966-08:002015-01-20T06:53:49.966-08:00amazing theme.amazing theme.Stephan Peter Carl Victor Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03089105614710560256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-85649140799585527102015-01-19T20:37:52.076-08:002015-01-19T20:37:52.076-08:00perfectly done.
a hot entry.perfectly done.<br />a hot entry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-41969975407327325782015-01-18T18:01:52.633-08:002015-01-18T18:01:52.633-08:00so sexy in the end, the thirst and eagerness in th...so sexy in the end, the thirst and eagerness in them are shown vividly.<br /><br />:)<br /><br />lovely poem.Alissa Meredith Jill Osborn Schapirohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12683660390922910187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-55639247849710119572015-01-18T17:28:23.553-08:002015-01-18T17:28:23.553-08:00love it,
you swim like a fish,
fish like a fisher ...love it,<br />you swim like a fish,<br />fish like a fisher man.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-55367927843906468862015-01-18T16:31:18.843-08:002015-01-18T16:31:18.843-08:00the world is an egg where we live inside and feel ...the world is an egg where we live inside and feel blind.<br /><br />lovely sentiments and metaphors.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-36379332201593955502015-01-18T12:22:27.412-08:002015-01-18T12:22:27.412-08:00gorgeous choice of words and imagerygorgeous choice of words and imageryAngela Cohanhttp://angelacohan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-3023933351645884742014-05-25T22:01:11.387-07:002014-05-25T22:01:11.387-07:00Cast fear upon a line of words? I have to do that ...Cast fear upon a line of words? I have to do that in order to reel a heart in? Well guess what, ms Annie-I'm-glad-you're-back, I'm willing to do that for a good heart . Or two .<br /><br />I like when you explain your poems because they become deeper and richer for me.<br /><br />Hugs from me,<br />Love<br />kjkjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-23656766320338195432014-05-24T22:29:43.526-07:002014-05-24T22:29:43.526-07:00I wonder what red tastes like :-) Great poem.I wonder what red tastes like :-) Great poem.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-1249464011927496632014-05-20T10:40:17.546-07:002014-05-20T10:40:17.546-07:00No apology needed. I took no offense. The great th...No apology needed. I took no offense. The great thing about poetry is you take from it in accordance to your heart...your concerns, your successes, your journey. It's all good. They weren't ramblings :) You go ahead and type filterless here. I don't mind it at all!Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-28065790578742546992014-05-20T05:34:15.533-07:002014-05-20T05:34:15.533-07:00i had to follow up in reference to my ramblings ab...i had to follow up in reference to my ramblings about 'co-dependency' and 'enabler'. i apologize for even bringing up these banal words to reference what you were speaking about in your lovely piece. guess your words directed me toward introspection and my fingers typed without personal filtering. i understand that 'mica' (used for resistance or conductivity in electricity) attire one wears when dealing with personal relationships. i do love your piece :)Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-32980290561059137732014-05-19T16:59:18.291-07:002014-05-19T16:59:18.291-07:00No, you cannot reel in a heart.
**blows kisses**
...No, you cannot reel in a heart.<br /><br />**blows kisses**<br />DebDeborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12195623810400107239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-7060695836760069892014-05-19T13:17:46.518-07:002014-05-19T13:17:46.518-07:00For the most part they are indeed, very personal e...For the most part they are indeed, very personal experiences that are a part of my life. Sometimes I can write the experiences of others, and on rare occasion total fiction...but that is much harder for me :) Would like to work on it though, along with what Cohen does, which is attempt to write outside his personality. I have not been able to do that yet. Thanks Anthony!!<br />Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-87296160572748325752014-05-19T10:37:56.779-07:002014-05-19T10:37:56.779-07:00I am as usual amazed; pulled into the world you ar...I am as usual amazed; pulled into the world you are able to portray, always unexpected. The visions of the drama portrayed I have come to imagine as more than observation, as personal experiences that haunted or continue to haunt. Some remind me of mine.. Mostly I’m just happy to be here and have these opportunities to immerse in your words. Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-52280112830382418902014-05-19T10:02:57.212-07:002014-05-19T10:02:57.212-07:00That's all true of course. I understand your p...That's all true of course. I understand your point when it comes to non-human carriers of pleasure. The issue comes when I try to please soemone, or omit words of truth in a way that deny who I am, just to make someone else happy or feel better. It is this lack of speaking up for my own needs and opinions that has parched me and held me back in my emotional intimacy with others. But I'm totally with you regarding the glass enabler for my wine :)Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-66440356700235044872014-05-19T09:58:24.386-07:002014-05-19T09:58:24.386-07:00Sometimes it's good to revisit where we've...Sometimes it's good to revisit where we've been so we celebrate once more, how far we've come :) Thank you Yvonne!Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-49184625957564735912014-05-19T09:57:36.069-07:002014-05-19T09:57:36.069-07:00In my mind Passion is red. I suppose that's wh...In my mind Passion is red. I suppose that's why I used the word. I want passionate words, whether they are disagreements or praises :)Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-38399130902074943122014-05-19T02:58:55.293-07:002014-05-19T02:58:55.293-07:00'co-dependence', 'enabler', words ...'co-dependence', 'enabler', words that make it easier to express of oneself or for others to impart a judgement trying to encapsulate the compexities of relationships in life, to life. we are all co-dependent and enablers because we want to be a part of and a desire to be loved. i drink a glass of wine because i like the taste. the glass enabled me to capture the wine in a confined space so that i can taste it, maybe spilling it every once in a while but it does taste good. 'pleasing' is a positive thing and not to be considered a negative. when i smell the flowers they are pleasing and i'm pleased to smell them.. they are enablers and i am co-dependent to their waft. <br /><br />loved this piece, mi amiga. gracias for 'sharing' yourselfMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-54704404658084011402014-05-18T20:57:33.063-07:002014-05-18T20:57:33.063-07:00What a beautiful and sad poem at the same time. I...What a beautiful and sad poem at the same time. I enjoyed reading it. Reminded me of a part of my life I don't like to think about, but it was good revisiting tonight. Thanks for sharing it.Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-19826682239358986972014-05-18T17:59:36.901-07:002014-05-18T17:59:36.901-07:00I sooo liked this if the taste of red is like this...I sooo liked this if the taste of red is like this poem then i want that too<br /><br />ChrisWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3316020526036835406.post-74780560574866578302014-05-18T14:36:18.757-07:002014-05-18T14:36:18.757-07:00SPOILER ALERT - Sometimes I feel like this is just...SPOILER ALERT - Sometimes I feel like this is just for Anthony...and that's just fine, cuz he is a non-poet reader who reads here and wants to know, like a real friend would. This is a poem about my in articulation...how hard it is to speak my wants/preferences, without hiding in the shadow of what people need from me and my co-dependence to be pleasing. I am breaking out of that, and it's HARD....oh so hard. The practice is exhausting. But I will keep at it. There is no intimacy without baring the truth of human spirit. The more you hide, the more you live among shadow.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.com